Tuesday, January 20, 2009
friend prompt
When I see homeless people I'm saddened because I cannot care for them. So, I care for my friends as much as possible. As a friend, I would think of myself as caring. My arms are open to a trusted stranger or a friend who needs someone to love her. I stop to help teachers when they struggle to carry more then they can handle. Plenty of times I've dropped what I'm doing to take a lost animal to where it belongs so it doesn't wander into the road. Caring is the word most people will use but I believe I'm speaking the truth, because caring is living.
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I think you did a good job on putting details on your peace but the part were it says i care for my friends as much as possible i thought we were talking about homless people??? and how can you trust a stranger they might be phsyco???!!! the animal might have rabbies!!! theres a lot of things that are living????? caring is one but come on lee
ReplyDeletei think that you doing a good job. i like your hook and your conculsion. i think that the animal part don't have to be in this prompt.
ReplyDeletei think you did a good job with your prompt...but you could've had more description and added more examples...
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